tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24822455447342403022024-02-20T13:24:48.801-08:00Travis Manley's Writers BlogUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2482245544734240302.post-42153174568136025912010-01-02T14:42:00.001-08:002010-01-02T14:57:06.543-08:00My Writing ProcessHi all,<br /><br />Thought I would share a little on how my writing process works.<br /><br />I keep an ongoing list of story ideas so when I'm ready to write I always have somewhere to start.<br /><br />I start a story by brainstorming ideas, exploring who the characters are and where the conflicts are.<br /><br />Once I have a few pages of notes I start outlining and creating plot points.<br /><br />I take these key plot points write them out in a Word document and I start writing using each plot point like a guide point. I start at one and write to the next. I don't always start at the beginning either.<br /><br />I am always surprised how much I discover while writing that I didn't come up with while planning and outlining. I am always happy to embrace these new ideas as long as they are true to the story I'm trying to tell.<br /><br />I like to think as the first draft in two parts. The first is a really rough "outline draft." I write was quickly and furiously as I can trying to capture the story by its tale without stopping to worry about spelling or grammar errors, or if it is even legible to anyone but me. Part two is cleaning up what I wrote in my first draft making sure I have everything I wanted to say and seeing if anything new that I came up with still "gels" with everything else. I look at it like carving a statue out of a piece of stone. Each draft is like a pass over the stone, refining and refining, letting the story take shape until you end up with a piece of art.<br /><br />When I'm done with the first draft I usually show it to people and try to get some feedback. When this is done I go back and write the third and usually final draft with any needed corrections.<br /><br />This is my writing process, what's yours? Please feel free to share.Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2482245544734240302.post-15481527697377677442010-01-02T14:20:00.000-08:002010-01-02T14:40:49.280-08:00UpdateHey everyone and happy new year.<br /><br />I can't believe it's the year 2010! Where are all the flying cars and houses on the moon? I guess that might be more realistic in the year 2020, or maybe even 2100. Guess we'll have to wait and see.<br /><br />Here is a quick update to get everyone out there reading a chance to catch up (listen up all three of you).<br /><br />Back in August of 08 I started writing again (I had previously, but nothing too serious). I thought it would be a good idea to start this blog as a way of keeping track of what I was doing and maybe give some inspiration to other writers out there.<br /><br />Between August and November I wrote three short stories and submitted them to various magaziens etc. to be published. FYI I used <a href="http://duotrope.com/index.aspx">Duotrope's Digest</a> to find sites to submit to. All three were horror/sci fi and around 5,000 words. As of now none of them have been published, but I am still hopeful. I'm a reasonable person and I know that I can't expect to get my stories published right away when I still have so much to learn.<br /><br />In December I started a new story, but unfortunately have had a hard time finding time to work on it. I am just now finishing the first draft and hope to be finished with it soon. The current story (The House Next Door) has been very challenging. I have basically one character who spends a good 75% of the story sitting around in his house not doing much. I think part of the difficulty has been not having big chunks of time to work on it. I'm much more productive when I have at least two plus hours a writing session.<br /><br />I think this is going to be a good year. I'm shooting for at least one new short story a month and I am really optimistic about getting one of them published.<br /><br />Wish me luck!Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2482245544734240302.post-56247440217940943662009-12-02T09:05:00.000-08:002009-12-02T09:12:10.309-08:00New Short StoryJust started a new short story called The House Next Door. It is about a guy who starts noticing some strange things going on in the house next to his. I will post a full synopsis when it's done.<br /><br />I took a little more time than I usually do outlining and writing notes for this one. Im developing a lot of character and story that will probably not make it into the actual short story, but I think the fact that I know specific details about the plot will effect what I write.Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2482245544734240302.post-73201083947728784362009-11-07T09:32:00.000-08:002009-11-07T09:45:29.278-08:00New Short Story FinishedI just finished writing a new short story called The Pool Boy and submitted it to be published. Here is the synopsis.
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First, his girlfriend dumps him, and then his dad tells him he has to clean the neighbor’s swimming pool while they are out of town. He puts off cleaning the pool until the last minute, and when he finally remembers to do it, he finds the water is a green and polluted. Worse yet there is something dangerous lurking below the muddy surface. </span><o:p></o:p></span></p> I'm already working on an idea for a new story and plan on starting it soon.
<br />Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2482245544734240302.post-33366245181392046752009-10-29T15:15:00.000-07:002009-10-29T15:24:22.070-07:00Story Update: Click You're DeadI received my first response on one of the two short stories I have written and submitted to be published (so far). <br /><br />My story (Click You're Dead) was rejected, but I am oddly excited. It took less than a month to get this response and I was lucky enough to get a personal response with some compliments was well as some constructive criticism. <br /><br />My plan is not to go back and rewrite any of my rejected stories (unless requested) until I have written at least ten. I think that with ten good stories under my belt I will be better equipped to make the needed changes. Hopefully I will have learned a thing or two by that point. <br /><br />I am nearly finished with my current story, The Pool Boy, and will post an update as well as a synopsis when it is finished.Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2482245544734240302.post-9328762623955968842009-10-10T15:19:00.000-07:002009-10-10T15:30:57.050-07:00New Short StoryI just started working on another short story. <br /><br />I have been tossing ideas around for the last couple weeks and coming up with an outline. I came up with some ideas that I think might end up making a great novel or novella, but I'm not quite ready to tackle something that big just yet. I would like to see if I have any luck getting one of these short stories published before investing that much time into a project. <br /><br />Luckily, I had a lot of other ideas floating around. I decided to tackle something a bit more "manageable" for now. <br /><br />Its a horror story with a "deadly creature" that takes place in Florida. The hero is a teenage named Tony. <br /><br />I will post more about the new story when I get a few drafts done.Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2482245544734240302.post-28922627647078821382009-10-02T15:47:00.001-07:002009-10-02T15:54:10.919-07:00New Story Finished!I've just finished my second short story, Click You're Dead, and am getting it ready to submit for publication.
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<br />Here is a synopsis:
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His bad luck continues when the replacement camera he is borrowing starts malfunctioning, resulting in the loss of valuable photos of a famous musician taken hours before his death. Meanwhile, the city of Seattle is in chaos when people start dying in the streets for no apparent reason.
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<br />Wish me luck.
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<br />Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2482245544734240302.post-3710234693987478982009-10-01T09:31:00.001-07:002009-10-01T09:42:12.568-07:00Writing UpdateI'm currently working on yet another draft of Click You're Dead. I've got feedback on an earlier draft and making a few changes. <br />I've hit a few unforeseen roadblocks, however. I did an outline for the story but left a few things out in the open that I thought I could fill in along the way. This was a big mistake! I've decided to sweep these problems under the rug for now and try to take this as a learning experience. I'm definitely an outline writer, I need those little guide points along the way or the story starts to fall apart.<br />I still think its a good story, even better than the last one. I'm writing fiction too, and I think I have the right to take a little creative license.<br />Anywho, the final draft should be done soon. Then off to the next project.Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2482245544734240302.post-15328075325239566292009-09-26T08:27:00.000-07:002009-09-26T08:29:54.892-07:00Writing UpdateI'm currently working on the third draft of Click You're Dead. A short story about a photographer.Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2482245544734240302.post-66438409958260012032009-09-12T21:31:00.000-07:002009-09-16T12:28:44.237-07:00New Short StoryI just completed the first draft on a new horror short story called Click You're Dead about a photographer who has a streak of bad luck and people around him start dying.<br /><br />I'm looking forward to getting started on the second draft and fleshing it out a bit.Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2482245544734240302.post-2484352545683334702009-09-12T21:23:00.000-07:002009-09-12T21:31:22.703-07:00Great site for writersJust found this great website for writers called <a href="http://www.writingexcuses.com/">Writing Excuses</a>. The podcasts covers a lot of subjects new writers like myself need to hear.<br /><br /><a href="http://www.writingexcuses.com/">Writing Excuses</a> is hosted by writers <span style="text-decoration: underline;"></span><a href="http://www.brandonsanderson.com/">Brandon Sanderson</a>, <a href="http://www.schlockmercenary.com/">Howard Tayler</a>, and <a href="http://www.fearfulsymmetry.net/">Dan Wells</a>.<br /><br />Check it out <a href="http://www.writingexcuses.com/">www.writingexcuses.com</a>Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2482245544734240302.post-62084309797014616742009-09-05T14:25:00.000-07:002009-09-05T14:50:53.223-07:00Submitted My first Short Story!Big news!<br /><br />I finished my first short story Closed for the Season and submitted to be published. I don't want to give too much info away at this point. All I can say is Closed for the Season is a suspense story about a camping trip gone wrong.<br /><br />I will post more info when I can.<br /><br />Cross you fingers (and hairy-toes) for me.<br /><br />TravisUnknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2482245544734240302.post-81178257956670858112009-09-04T13:21:00.000-07:002009-09-04T13:28:46.933-07:00First Published Article at Associated ContentI just got my first article published at <a href="http://www.blogger.com/%20http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/2129129/a_beginners_guide_to_successful_blogging.html?cat=15">Associated Content</a>.<br /><br />Check out it out and let me know what you think.<br /><br /><a href="http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/2129129/a_beginners_guide_to_successful_blogging.html?cat=15">A Beginner's Guide to Successful Blogging</a><br /><br />Quick and easy tips on how to get started blogging!Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2482245544734240302.post-976114487558606732009-08-26T08:21:00.000-07:002009-08-26T09:42:29.920-07:00On Writing: Book Review<a onblur="try {parent.deselectBloggerImageGracefully();} catch(e) {}" href="http://ecx.images-amazon.com/images/I/51pLqiWyhLL._SL500_AA240_.jpg"><img style="margin: 0pt 10px 10px 0pt; float: left; cursor: pointer; width: 240px; height: 240px;" src="http://ecx.images-amazon.com/images/I/51pLqiWyhLL._SL500_AA240_.jpg" alt="" border="0" /></a>I'm one of the people that would read Stephen King's grocery list if he published it. A "constant reader," if you will. I haven't read a Stephen King book I did'nt like.<br /><br /><span style="font-style: italic;">On Writing</span> is an great read even if you have no interest in becoming a author. I've read it twice and wouldn't hesitate to read it again. King is such a pro, he writes in a way that feels conversational. Reading one of his books is like listening to an old friend tell you a real whopper of a story.<br /><br /><span style="font-style: italic;">On Writing</span> reads like an extended introduction in one of his novels. Less than half of the book is dedicated to the real nuts and bolts of writing, most of it is about his childhood and how he got into writing as well as the time when he got a few of his first books published up to his accident when he was hit by a car. If you ask me <span style="font-style: italic;">On Writing</span> could serve as the framework for a movie about Stephen King.<br /><br />I highly recommend this book. 5/5 Stars<br /><br /><span style="font-size:78%;">*Photo from Amazon.com</span>Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2482245544734240302.post-9088827852856611382009-08-25T11:19:00.000-07:002009-08-25T11:51:05.197-07:00English Grammar for Dummies<a onblur="try {parent.deselectBloggerImageGracefully();} catch(e) {}" href="http://www.amazon.com/English-Grammar-Dummies-Geraldine-Woods/dp/0764553224/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&s=books&qid=1251224406&sr=8-1"><img style="margin: 0pt 10px 10px 0pt; float: left; cursor: pointer; width: 240px; height: 240px;" src="http://ecx.images-amazon.com/images/I/51ASBE5X70L._BO2,204,203,200_PIsitb-sticker-arrow-click,TopRight,35,-76_AA240_SH20_OU01_.jpg" alt="" border="0" /></a>I must be more of a "dummy" than I thought. I Found this great reference book <span style="font-style: italic;">English Grammar for Dummies.</span> All the "For Dummies" books that I have read have really impressed me. When I was first getting into photography, most of what I learned was from <span style="font-style: italic;font-size:100%;" ><span id="btAsinTitle" style="">Digital Photography All-in-One Desk Reference For Dummies</span></span>.<br /><br />These books are written very simply. Just about anyone can pick them up and understand what they are reading without getting confused.<br /><br />My one beef with this book is the examples the author gives. She goes though the trouble of breaking down complicated information about punctuation and sentence structure so it's easy to read and understand and then gives these terrible examples.<br /><br />Here is one:<br /><br />"Lochness snatched the atomic secret and quickly stashed it in his navel."<br /><br />Come again...? Almost all of the examples are like this. They have characters with bizarre names doing bizarre things. Im sure this is intentional to be funny and entertaining, but it is distracting.<br /><br />Other than the crazy examples I highly recommend this book to anyone looking to get a refresher on English grammar.<br /><br /><span style="font-size:78%;">*Photo from Amazon.com</span>Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2482245544734240302.post-76903657351749949852009-08-22T10:32:00.000-07:002009-08-22T14:01:42.064-07:00Reading ComprehensionI have always loved to read, but have discovered that I have to really work to ensure I comprehend and retain what I read. For some reason I find myself racing through passages and not effectively absorbing what I read. I can finish a book or an article and have totally forgotten what I read later on. There are some advantages to this; I can reread the same book over and over and still be surprised in parts, but I would rather spend that time reading new books.<br /><br />I found some helpful sites dealing with how to improve your reading comprehension and retaining what you read, and thought I would pass along what I found.<br /><br /><h2><a href="http://marin.cc.ca.us/%7Edon/Study/7read.html"><span style="font-size:100%;">How to Improve Reading Comprehension</span></a></h2><h2><span style="font-size:100%;"><a style="font-weight: bold;" href="http://educatoral.com/SQR3.html">How to Read Textbooks </a></span><br /></h2><span style="font-size:100%;"><span style="font-weight: bold;"><a href="http://vandelaydesign.com/blog/blogging/10-tips-to-retain-more-of-what-you-read-online/">10 Tips to Retain More of What You Read Online</a></span></span>Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2482245544734240302.post-17479714545887578152009-08-22T08:15:00.000-07:002009-08-22T10:08:38.745-07:00Breaking News: The Gathering StormI just read that the next installment in<span style="font-style: italic;"> </span>the <span style="font-style: italic;">Wheel of Time</span> series <span style="font-style: italic;">The Gathering Storm</span> will be released earlier than expected.<br /><br />Here is the announcement from brandonsanderson.com:<br /><br /><span style="font-style: italic;">"This afternoon I got word from Tor that the release date of THE GATHERING STORM has officially been moved up one week. The new on-sale date in the U.S. and Canada will be October 27, 2009, so mark your calendars. We don't yet know if other markets will be following suit; as more information comes in I'll keep you posted.</span><div style="font-style: italic;" class="blog_post"> <p>Jason Denzel at <a href="http://www.dragonmount.com/">Dragonmount</a> is one of the lucky few who has had the opportunity to read the finished book, and he posted <a href="http://www.dragonmount.com/News/?p=585">his review of THE GATHERING STORM</a> at the end of July. The review does include some very minor spoilers that he's marked off so you can skip them if you want the book to be completely fresh when you open it up in October. Also over at Dragonmount today Jason posted <a href="http://www.dragonmount.com/News/?p=615">my comments on the situation with the outriggers and prequels</a>. Short version: A MEMORY OF LIGHT is what Harriet and I are focused on right now.</p> <p>I got home late last night from Worldcon, where Howard Tayler was beaten to the Best Graphic Story Hugo Award by the much-deserving Phil and Kaja Foglio with <a href="http://www.girlgeniusonline.com/">Girl Genius</a>. Congratulations!</p> <p>In <a href="http://www.writingexcuses.com/2009/08/08/writing-excuses-season-3-episode-11-trimming/">this week's Writing Excuses episode</a> Howard, Dan, and I talk about trimming—tightening your prose and reducing word count without changing your story. And while at Worldcon we recorded three episodes with the puppeteer and Campbell-winning writer <a href="http://www.maryrobinettekowal.com/">Mary Robinette Kowal</a>, so that's something to look forward to in upcoming podcasts.</p> <p>And since it's Tuesday, a new MISTBORN 3 annotation has gone up and I have three links to give you: <a href="http://www.brandonsanderson.com/annotation/275/Mistborn-3-Part-One-Wrap-Up">Part One Wrap-Up</a>, <a href="http://www.brandonsanderson.com/annotation/276/Mistborn-3-Chapter-Fourteen">Chapter Fourteen</a>, and <a href="http://www.brandonsanderson.com/annotation/277/Mistborn-3-Chapter-Fifteen">Chapter Fifteen</a>. The beginning of Part Two is when Spook shows up, so these are chapters I particularly like. It's more setup, but with a more epic scope like HERO OF AGES has, more setup is necessary."</p></div>Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2482245544734240302.post-23680976011117127332009-08-22T07:55:00.000-07:002009-08-22T07:57:13.224-07:00Ghost StoryI just started reading <span style="font-style: italic;">Ghost Story</span> by Peter Straub. Good so far, but im not really sure where it's going.Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2482245544734240302.post-46910877790503403452009-08-21T15:17:00.000-07:002009-08-21T15:29:33.541-07:00Progress ReportI started on a third draft of a short story I'm working on today. I took a little break between drafts to brush up on some grammar and punctuation basics. The story is about a family that goes camping in a remote area of the Pacific Northwest and run into some trouble with another camper.<br /><br />In this draft I'm hoping to get the word count down from 6,500 to around 5,000 or less. I also need to come up with a title. I'm currently using "Bad Camper" as a place holder, but I need something better. Other than that I'm just going to try and apply some of what I learned from reading "The Elements of Style" and really strip down everything that isn't important to the story and polish everything that is.Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2482245544734240302.post-32699518390729767322009-08-20T11:08:00.001-07:002009-08-27T07:21:20.040-07:00Book Review: Ender's Game<a onblur="try {parent.deselectBloggerImageGracefully();} catch(e) {}" href="http://ecx.images-amazon.com/images/I/51ZATVFVRNL._SL500_AA240_.jpg"><img style="margin: 0pt 10px 10px 0pt; float: left; cursor: pointer; width: 240px; height: 240px;" src="http://ecx.images-amazon.com/images/I/51ZATVFVRNL._SL500_AA240_.jpg" alt="" border="0" /></a><meta equiv="CONTENT-TYPE" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"><title></title><meta name="GENERATOR" content="OpenOffice.org 3.0 (Win32)"><style type="text/css"> <!-- @page { margin: 0.79in } P { margin-bottom: 0.08in } A:link { so-language: zxx } --> </style> <p style="margin-bottom: 0in;">This being a "writers" blog, I thought it would be appropriate to include book reviews. My first review is on Orson Scott Card's <i>Ender's Game</i>. The 20th anniversary audiobook edition. If your looking to pick up a copy; here it is on Amazon.com <a href="http://xrl.in/2xwm">http://xrl.in/2xwm</a>. You can also read a review from the author there.
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<br /><b>Quick Summary:</b> Set in the future, Ender is a six year old boy sent away to battle school where he must learn to save mankind from an alien species known as "The Buggers."
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<br /><b>Review (no spoilers):</b> I had a friend in high school (maybe it was middle school) who tried to get me to read this book. “It's about aliens and video games,” he said. I'm not sure why I wasn't immediately sold; guess I was too busy reading about dragons and wizards. He ended up telling me about how the book ended, and I thought it sounded interesting, but never got around to reading it.
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<br />I finally got around to reading <i>Ender's Game; </i>listening to it to be more exact. <i>Ender's Game</i> is a great read. I like how it's a story about kids acting and speaking like adults even though they are very leery of them. It would be easy to forget how young most of the kids are until one of them calls the other a "fart eater."
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<br />Really, the only thing I didn't care for in the book the number of battles in battle school. They were entertaining at first, but got old fast. I didn't feel like they moved the story along. I felt like the author could have said everything he needed so say about these battles in two or three of them. It would be a bit like JK Rowling taking chapter after chapter to explain every aspect of every Quidditch match in the <i>Harry Potter</i> books. Sure, its fun to read a little here and there, but it's not the real meat and potatoes of the story.
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<br />What was most interesting to me was the interaction between Ender and his classmates; despite having the odds against him he still managed to make friends. Equally interesting was Ender's struggle to be a peaceful person despite every aspect of his surroundings trying to make him a killer.
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<br />I highly recommend this book.
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<br /></span><span style="font-size:78%;">*Photo from Amazon.com</span>Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2482245544734240302.post-44319931682733003922009-08-20T09:35:00.001-07:002009-10-01T09:31:05.752-07:00First Post<a onblur="try {parent.deselectBloggerImageGracefully();} catch(e) {}" href="http://www.dreamstime.com/green-highlighter-isolated-thumb3759651.jpg"><img style="margin: 0pt 10px 10px 0pt; float: left; cursor: pointer; width: 184px; height: 136px;" src="http://www.dreamstime.com/green-highlighter-isolated-thumb3759651.jpg" alt="" border="0" /></a>I just had a (great) idea to start a writers blog where I can post updates on my attempts to become a published writer. I have been writing stories for as long as I can remember and I have finally gotten to a point where I want to take it to the next level and try to get something published. My goal is to write several new stories all short fiction (3,000-5,000 words) and start submitting them to magazines.<br /><br />I have written a rough draft of my first story and have set it aside to spend a little time brushing up on the basics of writing and grammar. I feel so rusty on this stuff. I have been reading through a text book of my wife's "Essentials of College English" and it feels more like reading a foreign language. Luckily when rereading Stephen King's "On writing" he recommended "The Elements of Style" by Strunk and White and I have been learning a lot from it.<br /><br />Hopefully someone will stumble across this blog and get a laugh at my expense at my trial and errors, and maybe someone will find this and learn something. I will be happy either way.<br /><br />Please feel free to leave comments, questions, or words of wisdom.Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0